Wednesday, 28 March 2018

Silver Jewel Story Script-writing Edit No.2

Script-Writing Silver Jewel. No 2



“PHARMACIST TROUBLE”
By
Bethany Hayes





2014006193@student.sit.ac.nz
FADE IN:
INT. BEDROOM – MORNING

OLIVER, the usually serious, dark haired, 24-year-old, is in bed grabbing tissue after tissue and blowing his nose. SILVER JEWEL, a silver haired, 19-year-old, mute, shy guy, is leaning in the doorway. OLIVER notices SILVER staring at him.

OLIVER
(coughing)
Silver, please, come here.

SILVER waltzes towards OLIVER.

OLIVER
(sniffs)
Can… can you do me a, favor?

SILVER looks excited but OLIVER frowns.

OLIVER
Ummm. Can you go to the pharmacy
and get me some acetaminophen?

SILVER’s expression turns to a frown and he starts to shake his head, nervous.

OLIVER
(coughing)
It would, make me feel better. Do
you want me to, feel better, or not?

SILVER nodes his head slowly as OLIVER blows his nose

OLIVER
Good. Now get going! You better
be back here by lunch, got it?

SILVER nodes again and backs out the door. OLIVER slumps back in his bed.

INT. PHARMACY – NOON

SILVER looks around the store with large eyes and walks to the counter where he meets a bored and tired PHARMACIST.

PHARMACIST
Good morning sir, how may I
help you today?

SILVER takes out his notebook and tries to write ‘acetaminophen’. SILVER lifts the notebook up and shows the PHARMACIST.

PHARMACIST
(clears throat)
Sir, I’m sorry but I do not
know what you're scribbling.

SILVER looks down at his notebook embarrassed.

PHARMACIST
You know, sir, you could tell me
what the word is. I could help
you a lot faster.

SILVER stares for a moment then spins around and stomps down an aisle.

PHARMACIST
(sighs)

The clock behind the PHARMACIST speeds up to show the passing of time as he stands there bored and unmoving



SILVER returns to the counter disappointed and empty handed.

PHARMACIST
(sarcasm)
Did you find what you were looking
for?

SILVER glares and shakes his head.

PHARMACIST
(Annoyed)
Are you going to tell me what you
would like now sir?

An idea springs to mind and SILVER grins as he takes out his phone. 

PHONE
Hey Oliver! How do you spell that
medicine you wanted? I don’t know
how… :/

SILVER stares at the screen, but there's no reply.

PHARMACIST
(More annoyed)
Sir. If you’re not going to tell
me what you would like, then
I cannot help you.

Red faced, SILVER nods and turns to the exit. But SILVER stops as he imagines how sick OLIVER is.

OLIVER (V.O.)
(quiet)
Ummm. Can you go to the pharmacy
and get me some acetaminophen?

SILVER takes a step forward but then OLIVER's voice is louder.

OLIVER (V.O.) (CONT’D)
(louder)
It would, make me feel better. Do
you want me to, feel better, or not?

SLIVER slowly turns around and trudges back to the counter. The PHARMACIST looks disappointed.

PHARMACIST
So, what can I do…

SILVER interrupts the PHARMACIST by suddenly pointing at a random medicine in fount of him.

PHARMACIST
Umm… You want Allopurinol?

SILVER suddenly grins wide and points at another medicine.

PHARMACIST
Amitriptyline?

SILVER swiftly points at another over and over.

INT. SILVER JEWEL’S MIND - AFTERNOON

PHARMACIST
Albuterol?
(pause)
Azithromycin?
(pause)
Atorvastatin?

SILVER being bombarded by all these words gets dizzy as he imagines medicines, the words of the medicines, and the PHARMACIST’s head flying past him.

PHARMACIST
(distant, fuzzy)
Alprazolam? Amlodipine?
Amiodarone? Allopurinol?
Amoxicillin? Aspirin?
Atenolol?

SILVER is shacking with frustrated and scowls at the PHARMACIST.

INT. PHARMACY – AFTERNOON

Abruptly, SILVER’s phone makes a sound and all the chaos stops.

Phone
(vibrates)

SILVER snatches his phone and reads the screen.

PHONE
Oh ya. You can’t speak. It’s
acetaminophen

Relief floods SILVER and he shoves the phone in PHARMACIST’s face.

PHARMACIST
Ohhhh. You wanted acetaminophen?

SILVER nods his head frantically. The PHARMACIST takes some acetaminophen off the shelf, scans it, bags it, and hands it over.

SILVER leaves the store as quick as he can

INT. BEDROOM - AFTERNOON

OLIVER is still in bed as SILVER walks in.

OLIVER
(moans)
About time.

SILVER abruptly launches the acetaminophen at OLIVER’s face and stomps off.

Oliver
(in pain)
AGH! HEY! What was tha…

OLIVER is interrupted by his phone receiving a message.

PHONE
Enjoy your medicine :3 I am never
leaving this house alone again

FADE OUT:
THE END

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