Finished Animatic

I have presented my animatic to my class

This is the animatic they had viewed

They gave me advice to improve my work. This is what they said/mentioned:

• How did it get all cleaned up so fast?
• Need to make it obvious that it is completely different. (Colouring the scenery will help) - White walls, coloured bookcase.
• Line-work for characters thicker, background thinner. Bolder characters, grayer background.

Adding past context to their relationship

• Add in dialogue with a past mess. "Don't move THIS time!"

Adding future context to what will happen

• Just before Oliver leaves, Oliver looks around shocked and horrified. 
• After Oliver slams the door again, the room is messed up again.
• Make it clear that Silver is in BIG trouble later.